3 Things to Revise:
- I need to create a better intro.
- I need to reorder some parts of my paper.
- I need to make sure that all of my "evidence"/events clearly connect to my point.
3 Things to Edit:
- I've been going back, and making sure that I've been using proper grammatical structures
- I've been choosing my words more carefully, instead of the its, this, and thats.
- Along the lines of my second editing point, I've been trying to be more specific with the words that I've been using.
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