Strengths and Weaknesses

S: Value, structure, and activities are good points to cover.
W: Define more of what a female gang is, looks like, functions, etc. You may not need to add male gangs

S: Great topic. I am interested and want to read the final draft.
W: Strengthen the body of the paper.

S: I think that this is a very interesting topic.
W: Try and find evidence that supports what you are trying to say.

S: I did not know that there were female gangs, so this could be a very informative paper.
W: You need to narrow down your focus and direction of the paper.

S: You have a lot of good ideas about what you want to say in your paper.
W: Try and narrow down what you want to say, so it will be easier to follow and easier to refute.